CALI:
-vocab on point - well used in right places
-structure was decent
-you covered topic okay- in places you strayed
-imagery was tight and all the way through keepin me readin
-orignality was there in a lot fo your lines
-overall - 8/10

Whyte Ave
-gd vocab in places some better words could have been used that would have been more emotive
-structure was decent
-orginality in places
-imagery was created but not continuously which made some areas f ur drop boring and less emootional

VOTE: cali

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