Rastafari Walk Tall
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Vote: lyric
Lyric
-vocab on pint
-structure on point
-best topic coverage out of all poems ive looked @ so far
-great imagery continously
-no emotion, try and create this or put some in
-8.5/10
WickedClown
-tight poem
-didnt cover topic that much
-dnt worry as much bout rhyming u can sacrifice it for imagery and flow
-emotion was there
-7/10
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