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Old 12-28-04, 05:38 PM   #8
Ca'lam
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on the real... ya last one was nice.. but this one was off beat.....you have a flow that was constant, but it wasent with the beat.. the beat was bad that might be why u was off beat.. lyrics were niiiice tho.. word to the lyrics.. just work on the flow ..you'l be striat
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