Voted For: MaRVJay1009

Marvjay.............
i dont get y u be spittin dem bar's,but stop mention marv's..
u not a gangsta mc just a "tuff-poet" like da nigga from "oz"*
ok opener....1st line wasnt great...2nd line hit pretty hard...made me laugh

stay tryn da clown me well,but dog how ya pound keep shells
u nice? but u have "no-proof" like "em" be he found "d12".....
good wordplay.....hit decent.....good bar

look at 1 of george post if u wanna c da sloppyest fukk ryhme
fukk ya "crew" fag 2 mags a leave ya "body.above ya.mind"...
not really feelin it....coulda been better...wasnt too great

ima slump dis chump...he's gay he like men da touch his butt
a "straw" n "sex" describes ya skillz cuzz you "fuckin-suck".....
good meta n wordplay.....1st line is played...but 2nd line hit hard

your goin da b my 1st example ima b deadin dez fukkz....
ya cd a be like "air" when it drop cuzz it a "neva be touched"
it was ok....should have came with a better closer though...2nd worst bar of your verse

George..........
Fuckin joke'll get smoked, and for his skill i'm still searchin'
cus if J had a dime for every time he came ill - he'd be a virgin
decent opener....hit decent....not real hard though

weak he's the worst in Queens, kid's equipped with piss poor spits
the only time i'd peep Marv's cuts - is if they're were on his wrists
ok.........just a decent punch....nothin spectacular

bitch is geek reaks of ass, doubt he knows how to win
n if his verse looks like crap - its' cus i scared the shit out of em'
1st line not good.....2nd line better but you shoulda made it a lil more complex and it would have hit harder than it did

sit down you simp, how can you fend, for yourself you smell of herb
Marv'll make Rv proud when he drops...off the face of the earth
hit decent.....ok bar

a waste of my words the gay's merked, wack that he raps is strange
so i gave Mj a penny for his thoughts - and still got back change
played....very very played....sorry but it is....just not too great of a closer



so i voted for marv because...........i thought overall his punches hit harder than stanzas.....both had some nice multis but marv used more....marv killed george witht he wordplay and metas........marvs verse was just better

but....one thing you need to work on marv....is start spelling out your words....its annoying tryin to read somebodys verse when your using the words .....ya...cuzz...fukkz....neva...dem......well you get the picture....but just start spelling out your words the way they need to be spelled....it was the only part i hated about your verse...no hate...just stating facts....good battle both of you

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