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Old 12-28-04, 07:10 PM   #8
50hater_killer
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CALI

His poetry was better I believe his rhyming was well put together he had good imagry and he had it as if I was their myself here are the two that I loved.

Harp cords sethered by dark claws of deception destroying hope
The music of life tumbling down shattering in crashing notes
The blood spills like melted wax on a heated surface
Tree bark is torn apart and objected to idol worship
The man stands apart from the siblings of adam
His mindframe confused hatred trapped in a continous pattern
His sword bloodied with the life of the innocent
A body of stone on his face a look of indigence

my vote goes to CALI