Voted For: Infector Mindz

Phenom:
um im not sure what you were doing but shit your stucture made my eyes bleed to death.....lol....no hate but shit work on stucture, and seriously you need to work on your flow.....also try using some witty pucnhelines and some wordplay to give it some taste lol....pz

Ol School
im not quite sure what you were pointing oit but wtf...even know im giving you this you need work on flow and stucture it seriously ran off bad....your vocab might have been great but you need work on punchlines and try using wordplay but first learn the basics lol...nah im playin your punches were good lol....wordplay was there a bit....no ahte to both pz

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