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Old 12-29-04, 12:57 AM   #9
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Well look here skripz imma imma give you some tips
You got dusty spits nigga u need to Refurbish Lips
^^nope
Well im Puttin things together great like a stapler
Put the Decloration* on ur writtins n ull have a Valuble peice of paper
^^decent
If You say u the greatest tight or any of that im the same**
You a peice of shit Now you know why the dump is callin ur name
^^weak

coulda came harder kid.....you had a good flow but ..........you had basic vocab.....stretched lines.......bad structure........weak punches and i gues a personal attempt..........okay meta.....no wordplay

Haven’t battled in a while. . . I’m feeling a little rusty
But what I’m wondering is....
..........how can you have 5 wins and still be dusty?
^^decent
You Been here since August…still a light weight? Shit doesn’t factor
H.F. thinks he's rolling on dubs but he's driving a tractor
^^humerous
High F. is whack. . .all his punches are missing...
...Like where he's loctaed*
When it comes to spitting. . .H.F. don’t bring shit…
…Like he’s constipated
^^nice personal/punch

okay you came harder with punches and personals.........you had better vocab..........your flow was better.........your structure wasnt too great..........you had no multi's........

v/Skriptz
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