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Old 12-29-04, 01:17 AM   #12
Ike
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Voted For: Assas-Sin

hmm not too great of a battle but heres how i break it down

plustwo
i'm going to asass-in ate this faggot, i asked for 10 lines,
i aint gonna let you slip cos im dressed to the nines,
not a good opener....self glory

taking your life, youve been capped, bagged and buried,
all you can rhyme is boys and toys, but my rhymes are varied,
hmm...not too good man....self glory again at the end of 2nd line

just face it im better, im the guy that makes your bitch wetter,
unilliterate, you cant tell the difference between normal and BLOCK letters,
decent punch.....hit ok.....

line seven, i'm taking you too heaven, pretty boy needs to stop rap,
you need to stop that, cos i'd happily clap you with 2 gats,
gunplay...not good...

your new to rv, it's best you leave, you'll never be respected,when people see me murk your ass, you'll be nothin but rejected,
structure was off.....kinda of downing yourself on this bar...but still hit ok

assassin......
Fam whatz goin on in ya sloppy head
Doin dat kind of shit get ya ass merk white T be turnd to Red
played man...not a good opener

C'mon you couldnt spit Raw even if ya threw up uncook meat Really when da slugz rain out you run.Just imagine if i brought da heat
1st line decent...2nd line not good...but 1st line hit ok

Ya record is 2-5.Shit i thought you were dope since youre da Highest
Damn fam thatz da baddest record Ive seen since ya last Alias
lol pretty decent....ok personal

You takin dis win from me only happens in ya dreamz
Cuz youre wacker than that one 112 song Peachez N Cream
not good.....

C'mon on faggot stop frontin like you all hard
Saw ya on da streetz and you was carrying a ChuckyCheese Card
fake personal....didnt hit too good

Fam da closest you get to havin a chick on ya dick
Iz a dragqueen suckin on ya dick when youre pullin HIS wig
hit decent...could have been worded better....


ok so basically my vote goes to assassin for having better structure....his punches hit harder....and plustwo had too much self glory in his verse.....sorry plustwo...no hate...just how i felt about the battle......
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