Voted For: Spektikul

Spektikul:
ok i liked your use of punchlines and your stucture was great.....pretty good damn flowing in there...and a few use of multis.....the vocab wasent that great but i seen it when you needed it...the wordplay wasent really there..but it was all ight......good verse...pz

Ike:
you had a good stucture in all but i wasent feelin your punches so much you used some good vocab so i give you the credit you also used some mutlis in the spots you needed them....but shit i jsut feel spek got ya a little easier....try workin on using soem wordplay and punches more oftin...it would be tight then..no hate pz

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