View Single Post
Old 12-29-04, 10:36 AM   #8
plustwo
.:Grim Reaper:.
 
plustwo's Avatar
 
Posts: 424
From: u.k
IP:

Voted For: Notorious B.I.G.

notorious you got this in my opinion here's why...

My punches send ya flyin kid... forreal... I cant believe you tryin this
Dopium? Thuglife? Lil CALI? nope.. noone likes ANY of ya aliases
^^ nice personal... i can see where your coming from
Im on toppa this bitch.. but ima deliver a message we all thought was obvious shit
CALI aint that great, wannabe... so pack up kid and just get offa his dick!?
^^ nice multi and good punch...
Stick a split in ya tits, till ya riddled with slits, from ya middle to dick
Got my fists up to hit, no need for more lines... kid i'll rip ya wit six..
not bad but you rhymed dick twice

overally alright verse with a couple of good multies and punches 7/10

scene your verse was aight but you lacked the punches but you did good for a first battle...

Who the fuck are you?? U aint the real biggie smalls
You Tellin everyonr on RV to GET off of Pacs Balls
^^ not bad but the biggi and pac thing is played...
claimin u good when ya wack to fat havin heart attack
cuz ya 'rhymes' are has corny has a cracka 'JACK'
^^ not bad but the flow was edgy...
Bettah watch ya mouth when u talk shit to me
thinkin u good boy u been watchin to much T.V
^^ couldav bin a punch but second line was wack
Say 1 exercise ur fat ass has actually have done
Ill have ya havin more ATTACKS then BIG PUN
^^ same not bas but the flow lost you the edge...
listenin to ya shit over and over gets really 'old'
even if u r B.I.G You Know my Hearts Cold
^^ dont get it...

overall it wasnt that bad but you didnt have punches like b.i.g

return the favour links in the sig... no hate