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Old 12-29-04, 10:40 AM   #14
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Voted For: RED BEAM

I THINK THAT PYRO HAD THE BETTER VERSE THEN ARTIK PHROST
PYRO---I THINK U HAD A BETTER ALL AROUND VERSE...PUNCHES HIT REALLY HARD...METAS WERE BEIN USED CORRECTLY...FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS TIGHT A VERY GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTRE...WORDPLAY WAS USED VERY WELL...RHYMES WERE VERY GOOD...GOOD JOB 7.5/10
BEST LINES----i dont give a fuck if u a girl...i aint takin this soft
they call me PYRO bitch...cause i melt tha phrost
PSA runnin this shit…just stay on tha curb
Cross yo boundaries is deadly, and im speakin of more than just words
ARTIK----URE FLOW WAS PREETY GOOD...STRUCTRE WAS KINDA OFF...PUNCHES DIDNT HIT AS HARD AS PYROS...METAS WERENT USED VERY WELL BUT STILL IGHT...
WORDPLAY COULD HAVE BEEN USED BETTER BUT IT WAS OKAY... 6/10
BEST LINE----We don't hear a thing you say!..Ya whole fucken team is gay!!..
And ya 'career is onli piss', Because 'everybody goes for a Pee on PSAs'!!..//4 (ut oh..commercial..POTTY BREAK!)
(WHAT WAS WITH THE LTTLE BATHROOM BREAK COMMENT RANDOM BUT FUNNY...
PEACE...
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