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Old 12-29-04, 11:54 AM   #4
50hater_killer
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No show so I will critq peace.

You're flow was iight but next time try putting feeling into it, it was iight and you had everything to make it a topical to understand but you made it more sound like a battle but yea you just need to elevate on that and you will be good peace.