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Old 12-29-04, 12:14 PM   #12
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Voted For: Acuity



Lookin 4 rhyming classics, dont waste ur time checkin drops by Assa-sin
His punches are played and past-it, like he pickin up punches from the jurassic
multis was aight, punch aint connect picking up punches from jurassic WTF??? weak.....

Ur crews a sham, u make MC's laugh, like ur roster is a set from Def Comedy Jam
Wack City is ur native-land, milked lines like they coming from a mammary gland
set up line good again punch aint connect N i wasnt feeling it...

Ima taint ur so far perfect score, throw ur head and ur so-called rhymes to the hoards
Show RV Spittin Anonymous means fuk~all, like Bush claimin justifications for War
set-up line weak but this time punch connected decent....

Assasin so ur used to fatalities, testin me shows a serious lack of rationality
Ur name lacks originality, ima giv u a loss, bring ur record a degree of proportionality
decent vocab flow off thou....

In ur raps basics fail to be applied, u cud get merked by any MC worldwide
U couldn't transform and spit monstrous lines, even if u drank a potion like Jekyll and Hyde
decent...

I leave you in a shudder, your steering an ill-fated course, like u broke ur rudder
Spittin Anonymous brotha, cos lame and ur name are synonymous with eachotha
best bar u had preety good..........

man u had alot of bars that could of hit way better and all and some just aint make no sense and was weak as-hell last 2 bars was when u picked it up finally but it was to late...
6.5/10

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C'mon dawg you couldnt spit hot when ya body was ova heated
Ya changed ya name to Acuity cuz you kept gettin defeated
thats decent...

Beatin me is like you gettin being betta than me
See that will neva happen when ya fake ass keeps biting
flow off and punch was weak...

Ill clap you with da tipy toe of da 9
Youre my bitch so when i say sit you know ya place in line
flow ok, no punch

Takin me on was da dumbest decission ya made so far
Well maybe not?I think da first one was when ya went in da Gay Bar
weak, gay bar? weak....

Fuckin faggot get ya stack up before you get clap up
And if this lose doesnt sink in low enough to make ya throw up
clap up?-throw-up? dont not rhyme for shit.....
plus u should of re-worded that last line....

Backup Punk before i show ya how many bones ima break
You challeneged me so no show on me herb cuz itz too late...
decent ending....

mang after i saw acuity verse i thought u had this win hands down i even copy and paste the vote from acuity to u'rs only to copy and paste it back now that im done reading this shit...

honestly ya both lacked alot word but ass-sin u had no good punch, some of ya lines need to be re-worded and just think out-side the box word...