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Old 12-29-04, 12:54 PM   #19
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Chuck
Your Structure Was Better, Could Use A Little Improvment But It Was Good, You Had A Couple Punches That Was Good Here, I Cough A Little WordPlay In You Verse That Was Cool, Vocabulary Need To Be Upped A Little Along With Personals, Throw In Some Multi's And It Will Be Good

KKKHater
Your Structure Was All Over, You Had Some Good Vocabulary But Nothing SPecial, Your Punches Was Alright Nothing To Decent , Ha A ew Multi's But Not To Much, Meta's Need To Be In Here And Some Multi's

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