this was dope. i liked the flow the best in this piece. the rhyme scheme was ok, it did create an ill flow though. you had multiple words rhyming within bars and in between other rhyming words. at some parts you were complex but not that much..so if thats what you were trying to do you need to improve on that a little bit. the bars were a little stretched too. that was another weakness of this piece. but the rhyme scheme was dope and so was the flow. nice job

7/10