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Old 12-29-04, 01:35 PM   #13
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Voted For: Socrates

I THINK THAT SOCRETES TOOK THIS ONE-
SOCERETS I LIKED URE RHYME SCHEME...YOU HAD A GOOD FLOW...STRUCTRE WAS A LITTLE OFF BUT STILL GOOD...U HAD GOOD PERSONALS IN YOURE VERSE...PUNCHES HIT HARD AND FAST GOT RIGHT TO THE POINT...WORDPLAY WAS GOOD COULDVE BEEN BETTER BUT STIL GOOD...
6.5/10
BEST LNE---I'll merk this kid, and take his style and melt him in sec's
What kinda good MC can't even spell the word "respect"?
(NICE DISS)
TORQUE---YOURE VERSE WAS OKAY...YOUR STRUCTRE WAS A LITTLE OFF...PUNCHES DIDNT HIT AS HARD ASSOCRETES THOUGH BU TSTILL OKAY...HALF OF URE WORDS BALEY IF NOT DIDNT RHYME...FLOW WAS A LITTLE CHOPPY...
4/10
BEST LINE---Your A Plain Simple Actor In My Verse.............The Main Character......
In The Case Of Battling Some One Like Me Fear Is Your Worst Factor..
GOOD WORK TO BOTH OF YOU...
PEACE...
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