Voted For: 4fil

yo this is to long to brake down so if this aint good enough pm me to add on to my brake down aight.....

Led Poetic dont ever use them small lettering ever again u made it mad hard to read and follow ya shit so right there u lost cool-aid points.... but ya verse was soiled u stood on topic and had a couple of emotion brought out well but the structure was all fucked up but not a bad verse 7.5/10

4fil u'r verse was one i can relate to more with the contruction thing looking for money to servive is what i use to do constrction but i lost that job due to pricks who talk shit but anyways i felt u had more focus on this topic u stood on topic u made the read feel as if u was telling a real life story and had me into it all the way the intro was good the verse was good all around tight flow nice structure was way better and easy to read and follow u won this hands down...
9.0/10


* if it need to be more in depth let me know and i will.....