it was alright but nothing that special.not a bad rhyme scheme, had a ill flow. the way you had the flow made me want to read on more and more. flow was the best aspect of this piece. the rest was ok..not really complex. you need to work on structure and other rhyme schemes though. but im sure it would go nice with the beat
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6.5/10