Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: Vinci
aii this is how i feel
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I Liked your opening And the way you ended to but ya flow was kinda weak flowin in the middle but it was ok..........your vocab ? i dint really see n e good vocab in either of yalls verses o i left that alone ........um you lacked multi's but ya structure was nice.......now
Vinci
your opening was very weak i think You should atleast make the strongest punch in ya verse your first bar bcuz that makes someone want to continue readin ya stuff ................um....you lacked alot of basics like good structure or Vocab but you came wit a decent verse but it wasnt N E thing amazin to me..............There
RTF I Only Have one battle so Hit that up
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