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Old 12-29-04, 03:01 PM   #13
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Voted For: Vinci

aii this is how i feel

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I Liked your opening And the way you ended to but ya flow was kinda weak flowin in the middle but it was ok..........your vocab ? i dint really see n e good vocab in either of yalls verses o i left that alone ........um you lacked multi's but ya structure was nice.......now

Vinci
your opening was very weak i think You should atleast make the strongest punch in ya verse your first bar bcuz that makes someone want to continue readin ya stuff ................um....you lacked alot of basics like good structure or Vocab but you came wit a decent verse but it wasnt N E thing amazin to me..............There

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