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Old 12-29-04, 06:41 PM   #8
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Voted For: GKillaz05

open: GKilaz05: "I must diss this kid cant w"RAP" and it was just Chirstmas...
Smokin' another whack herb to throw onto my shit list...". -Very nice. Keeping with tha time at the mo. Funny, metaphor, hard punch that landed

clse: Gkillaz05: "Wanna See?... BLU BLAH BLAH HE HE HO HA HA HI IN...
I aint lyin - Just said a bunch of shit and fuck I still win..." -Just shows you doesnt it really. A cheeky ending that worked and made him look silly.

Eclipse's best bar: "you should start savin' up on alot of life support,if u get tha' chance
rappin' ain't ' yo' hobby....maybe you'd have a chance if you took lessons to "dance." -This is good, if only more of the verse was as good as this. Good punchline

GKillaz05's best bar: "Not many, Eclip's got to steal my keyboard to grab the W...
Dont even have to write something smart to trouble you..." -On another level this is. Good metaphor, heavy handed punch to brutalise the slapping.

Overall: There really aint no contest in this. GKillaz05 verse was better by far and on a completely different level. Eclipse's verse was based on a few "ok" punches. No wordplay metaphors ar really intelligent work in it at all. Whereas GKilla had all that with an entertaining verse to match. Even got in the references to Christmas. Easy vote for me
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