Voted For: BLACK~MAGIK

lil d
im not sure what that was but your stucture made my eyes bleed.....try and wokr on some stuctureizing the verse and use more wittyness of uses of punchlines and wordplay...lol....but your vocabulary was weak and all that your hole thing was weak sry no hate but go elevate pz

BlackMagic
hmm alright verse your stucturing was better but it still was weak....you used some good wordplay and your punches were locked.....you used some good vocabulary in all it was all good, good verse n all you took this simply...no hate to both of you pz

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