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Old 12-29-04, 10:26 PM   #9
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This Wass A Ko R/b Verse Wass Wack It Didnt Have No Real Punches Tha Words Were Messed Up,Tha Structure Wass Fucked You Were Self Gloryfying Did Have Some Vokab But Your Verse Wont Make Sence If U Dont Have Punches/Personals Ta Words Ya Opponent....


Skriptz, U Did Ok,You Had Good Personals ,Ok Punches Pretty Good Strukture But Ta Words Tha End Ya Verse Got Tired, Have Decent Punches Through Out Tha Whole Verse And Elivate Some More With Ya Vokab...........
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