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Vote: xceed

Necro Ptronix - meh.....ok drop...tried to come wit the mad personal angle but none of ur punches were gd enough to make the personals wothit.....ttry and come with more creative lines for your punches and a consistent structure.

Xceed
Im out to shock, out to rock out to put you on the hot spot,
You can play TWISTER and i'll still put you into tighter knots,
nice originality, decnt punch -8/10
Kids playin himself wit a name like Necro Pyronix,its ironic, but i'll have an insight to your mind like you were microscopic
ok filler, not really a punch -6/10
in reality i would send u a free visit to the Orthodontics,
kid before this battle started you already lost it.........
nice closing line, set up wasn't relevant, but an ok bar-7/10

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