not to bad, your rhyme's sort of fall off toward's the end
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I come bac home an yall still tryin ta test me man
I left wit venom wha make u think it won't be tha same,
I'm bac wit envy you know I got this ambition off in me
u alto cancel christmas nigga u won't live ta see 20,
keep playin around wit me throw u ova a brigde don't tempt me
I was raised by a Mason u don't wanna ear wit me,
so stop wit tha gimmes u don't wanna see this rivalry in me
I got enough guns an bullets to divide em' by plenty

you rhyme me 3 time's.^^

you need to use more tech vocab and rhyme's.

youy also need to leave 2 link's to open mic's you have left decent feed on.
return the favour,link's in sig.