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Voted For: Elusiv G
Acuty
Nice Mang This Was One Sided Hands Down, You Had Some Good Personals, Punches Was Targetting And Hitting Well, Decent WordPlay Here..Not To Bad But Some Alright Vocabulary...Structure Was Decent Multi's Was On Andd Of Over All This Was A Decent Verse...
Whack
Alright, You Need Work On Punches Coz It Wasn't There, Throw In Some Personals Better Ones And You'll Do Goof Multi's Could Of Make This Better, But You Lacked Alot VOcabulary Was Basic..Structure Was Alright OverAll You Still Need To Elivate.....
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