Banned: Cheating
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IP:
Voted For: Ill.Logic
ILL TOOK THIS ONE CAUSE XCELL CAME WAY TO SIMPLE FOR THIS ONE...
XCELL-ur verse lacked skill. ur punches were there, but u just used em wrong, and worded em wrong. ur structure fell off near tha midle to tha end, so that took away points. and ur rhyming were coo, but a lil simple...practice more, learn how to become more creative, then elevate (no hate)
ill.logic-ur verse wasnt all that great either. u had some nice punches in there, and some nice structure, but it also lacked skill. u just came out tha better person in this battle, but i still think u should practice more on some harder punches, then elevate.tha last bar was tha best. and i dont really think u should haf'to explain for every bar, thats unneccesary. but overall, u came out on top in this one...
overall-you both need to work on skill and creativity. ill.logic. took this one with harder punches and better wordplay.
plz, if u havent already(ill.logic) return a vote on tha battle in sig...
my bad xcell, but i had to do it honest, just practice a lil more...
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