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Old 12-30-04, 03:11 PM   #24
Wet Willy
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Easily Advance Knockout Plague on Any Day.Stop playin Homo
Understand Black this"The Real World" and Im batteling Karomo
ehhh decent opener.. needs more complexity 6/10
Portray of Teach vs Student can end Tragic in Raced for Harms?
BlackMelt undaPressure like Flames Held Up 2 Plastic Braced Arms
uhh im not really feeling this.. set up was weak. 6.5/10
This Deliverance from Hell..Has No Punches that of Thigh Know?
Ya Truth Tank is Empty..Throwin Pure Blanks like this is Tai Bo
has potential to be a great punch.. coulda been better 7/10
He Black? But turn Johnny Proper When..Fbi come wit the Raids
Believe me This time u gettin Played. like .."Ray".. playin Spades
ehh decent again.. u still need more wordplay 7/10
He Faded after Paramik & ReAppeared in my Efl Section wit Hate
You gone Pull just as Much votes. as Bush did from Section Eight
nah not feeling this.. again could be better worded... 6/10

Troop
32.5/50





Just look at ya past man, ya wack ass got zapped by a "ghost" rapper
think you the shit homy but where's ya respect, when u got ripped by casper
not a good opener but decent punch.. 7/10
And not just once, but twice man now ya “phantoms” come back to haunt ya
Like a retard on a playground, after this emberassment ya peeps will tuant ya
lmao.. funny shit... needs better wording though 7/10
Nice record you showin, wins in ya “wack noobs beat” column keep growin
Then shabba went blowin smoke at you and ya wind pipe stopped flowin
good personal.. your lines are stretched though... 6/10
Chokin you like bleach and amonia mixed up, now it got to ya thoughts
Think you hard cuz u got RV money? Dawg respect can’t be bought
decent.. too simple.. but hard hitting.. 7/10
When u first got on this site you had no idea what you was doin
Asked for my help and I gave it, even let you in my crew and…
dont like the unfinished sentence.. no punch.. needs work 6/10
This is how you repay me? Shit ain’t right, like allowin gay marriage
Ya time is done son, you went out long ago like travelin horse and carriage
lmao.. nice closer.. get job on this.. 8/10

Black Plague
41/50



just well explained so vote doesnt get dq'ed
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