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Old 12-30-04, 03:14 PM   #25
Detrimental
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Voted For: The Black Plague

Black got this but it wasn't exactly the easiest decision.....this was a GOOD battle.....Troop you had a nice verse but was you rappin out a dictionary? lol you had a nice verse.....almost enough to beat Black....nice verse....this was the most interesting battle i've voted on....and the hardest to vote on...i mean Troop came hard and came with everything and i think Black did too.....but Troop you didn't beat him

Black everything in your verse was good...i mean it wasn't perfect but it was good.....punches were decent and it flowed very well
good structure....some good multies.....metephors and wordplay was good but not the greatest...overall you had a nice verse

Troop you had decent punches but not enough to beat Black....stretched lines but still was a good verse...multies and wordplay was nice.....pretty much the same as Black....but Black just came harder...yours flowed ok but Black's flowed better

Overall a good battle.....only things that got Black the win was punches and flow.....simple as that....good battle
keep elevating
v/The black Plague

I expect a returned favor with an honest vote on my battle
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=167288
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