Thread: WiNC vs Nova
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Old 12-30-04, 04:11 PM   #23
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Winc:
im not sure what that was but it was sure not to great your vocabulary wasent really there and to be honest nether were your punchlines nore wordplay even tho you had attempts there wasent much wittyiness in your verse....im being honest to try an work on being creativie with punches n shit....ight..pz

Nova:
hmm not bad i liked your opener alot...it was pretty tight...very creativie your stucture and flow was nice and you overall the whole verse had some very creative punches and wittyness in your verse....a lil wordplay attepts but most of all the punches were there...no hate to both pz

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