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Old 12-30-04, 04:31 PM   #27
Triple_N
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Voted For: The Black Plague

Easily Advance Knockout Plague on Any Day.Stop playin Homo
Understand Black this"The Real World" and Im batteling Karomo

Setup was played & blah, punch was blah, I'm taking off more points cuz u choose to open wit dis...eh...1/10

Portray of Teach vs Student can end Tragic in Raced for Harms?
BlackMelt undaPressure like Flames Held Up 2 Plastic Braced Arms

Setup seemed promising but punch killed..u used ya simile completely wrong, made line wack...4/10

This Deliverance from Hell..Has No Punches that of Thigh Know?
Ya Truth Tank is Empty..Throwin Pure Blanks like this is Tai Bo

Setup was blah....once again horrible simile use...chill wit all da "likes"<---shit gets repetitive, an makes ya verses seem limited.....3/10

He Black? But turn Johnny Proper When..Fbi come wit the Raids
Believe me This time u gettin Played. like .."Ray".. playin Spades

Setup was terrible....punch was a decent try I'll give ya props for it even thought it fell short of what it shoulda been....5/10

He Faded after Paramik & ReAppeared in my Efl Section wit Hate
You gone Pull just as Much votes. as Bush did from Section Eight

Setup was wack an so was punch an its even worse cuz u used it as a closer, not impressive at all........3/10

overall: 16/50

Just look at ya past man, ya wack ass got zapped by a "ghost" rapper
think you the shit homy but where's ya respect, when u got ripped by casper

Setup was a decent personal, punch was blah...4/10

And not just once, but twice man now ya “phantoms” come back to haunt ya
Like a retard on a playground, after this emberassment ya peeps will tuant ya

once again good setup, blah punch...4/10

Nice record you showin, wins in ya “wack noobs beat” column keep growin
Then shabba went blowin smoke at you and ya wind pipe stopped flowin

fair setup, jus slightly above blah punch...5/10

Chokin you like bleach and amonia mixed up, now it got to ya thoughts
Think you hard cuz u got RV money? Dawg respect can’t be bought

NO NO...setup & punch wa sjus wack...2/10

When u first got on this site you had no idea what you was doin
Asked for my help and I gave it, even let you in my crew and…
This is how you repay me? Shit ain’t right, like allowin gay marriage
Ya time is done son, you went out long ago like travelin horse and carriage

a 4 line development punch<---if u gon do it make sure do punch is hard..which in this case it wasn't...3 line setup was like a story instead of a diss..an punch was jibberish...2/10

17/50

This battle wa spathetic on both sides....nothing even remotely ill came from either, troop had a bunch of wack similes an black plague just rambled about nothing...only difference was black's was a lil more personalized than troops...troop would just mention black's name in setup then foolow it with a wack generic punchline<----not a personal playa...black had some decent ATTEMPTS at personals<--they were wack but were actual personals so dats what helped him edge it out in my opinion..both y'all elevate an stay up.............1
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