Voted For: The Black Plague

LOL BLACK PLAGUE OWNED TROOP A WHOLE VERSE OF FUCKING PERSONALS HERE THE PHANTOM PLAY WAS CRAZY HERE THE WHOLE VERSE WAS JUST PERSONAL SHOT AFTER SHOT GOOD FLOW AND STRUCTURE AND VOCAB NICE A 8/10
TROOP GOOD PUNCHES BUT PERSONALS WIN BATTLES NOT PUNCHES GOOD VOCAB GOOD STRUCTURE TOO A 6/10

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