Voted For: Miss. Lyricist

Indeph:
.. its sad..but seems now FL's elevated..is herb infested..
..you couldn't be a lyrisist miss.. if you can't spell it!!..*
Weak opener, woudl've connected if she actually did spell "lyricist" wrong.
..private messeged me..take your regretions for lessons...
..because you never get OOOOO's like they discontinued..
Lol 2nd line sounded funny, but didn't make sense. Bar didn't rhyme actually.
.. commericals for herbal essence..an Identiy invador..
..How hard could it be..to crush a ..Brandy Impersonater..
Decent, ok personal here
..yea I can admit..you got some beauty..and better bells..
..but its messed up..your looks and lyrics not parelell.
Decent closer, could've been worded better though

Miss Lyricist:
It’s not my spelling skills, his stupidity’s unsurpassed
His rhymes are shitty caus he uses them to wipe his ass
Weak opener, got the concept but it didn't hit hard.
He certainly reps the dirty, the nigga infested wit lice
He’s more awkward than the silence before strangers break the ice
Better, good wordplay in 1st line
I think his thread is balding, I’ve never seen one so frayed
If he had hit me any harder, he would’ve needed a toupee
Setup was good, but punch didn't connect
His rhymes are like clogged pores, Noxzema* couldn’t handle the grime
If battling was like fighting pimples, he couldn’t bust a good rhyme
Decent meta here, overall good bar
He can’t be caliente*, he colder than the ashes in an ash tray
He couldn’t amount to spicy if I doused him w/pepper spray
Weak closer.

Winner: Miss Lyricist, with an overall better verse. Although neither of you really cam that hard in this one. No hate though, keep doin' ya thang.

RTF @ a link in my sig down VvvV there

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