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Old 12-30-04, 09:30 PM   #21
Lyriclesolja
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit

Damn.........
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not much to say on this one.....
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Kordozar-your punches seem to be played out......neva net threat....its stupid.....second with sentences that long you need multies BAD on some of the lines i couldent tell what the rhymin word was.....fix that.......your structure wasnt that bad ill give that to you.....overall if you had multies you probly would have won this elevate on that......i really didnt see any good metas.......just a weak verse....come harder next time....specially with someone of this calibur....step up your game....
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Sticky-Good verse it wouldent surprise me if you KO him....and i would like to see a rematch....any way.....if your gonna do multies. do them all through out the verse not only would it read better you will probly get more wins that way 2.....great metas. i can see that it is your strong suit...keep that up.....not really much els to say you pretty much steped on his head.......oh yeah and good structure.........so its easy to see my vote is for Sticky..
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(rematch-rematch-rematch!!!)
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