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Voted For: Lyriclesolja
Lyricle Solja
Alright Hommie Good Verse, Came Pretty Decent...Had Some Nice Punches In Here, In This Verse You Had Good Personals, But You Can Make It Better..Structure Was Decent Though Try And Make The Lines Line Up In All One Straight Line, Vocabulary Was Alright Kind Of Basic But It Was Decent....WordPlay, It Was Cool...But You Could Of Made It Better In Here
Skills
Alright Nice Verse You As Well As He Had Personals, Punches As Well Your Structure Was Fucked Up Though....That Needs To Be Elivated Alot....Vocabulary Was Basic I Mean For Real, But Multi's Was Here Pretty Good...In The Opener You Had Your Best Vocabulary, The Rest Was Weak....Not Much WordPlay In Your Verse, Just Coz You Put Those "" On Letters Does Not Make It WordPlay So Change That............
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.Over All This Battle Wasn't To Great But It Was Decent Enough, The Categories Was Good, On Personals And Meta's Also Multi's But If I Break It Down It Will Be Like This....
Personals-Tie
Punches-Tie
WordPlay-L.S.
Structure-L.S.
Vocabulary-L.S.
Vote=LyricleSolja
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