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Old 12-30-04, 10:25 PM   #23
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Voted For: Sticky Bandit

easy vote

punches- Kordo, you had more of em. Work on em though. Sticky, all yours were personals, but the ones u had were good.
personals- Sticky easy, yours were harder hittin, and you had more. Kordo, weak personals, weak material as well.
multis- Sticky for havin em.
metas- Sticky, good metas overall. MJ line is played though. Kordo, had a lot of em, but now good ones.
word play- Kordo, u had more wordplay, some of it witty, some not. Sticky, only one example of word play "wrapping"
structure- Sticky, nice structure, lines stayed somewhere near each other. Kordo, lines kept getting streched, work on ya structure
humor- Sticky, you had me smilin.
flow- Sticky, decent flow overall. Kept rollin, almost never fell off. Kordo, flow fell off a lot, hard to keep rollin.

Sticky, good drop overall. Work on more wordplay, and more punches. Punches + Personals= Total Merkation

Kordo, aight drop. Work on your personals, punches, and structure. It all helps.

No Hate Just An Honest Voter.

v/Sticky Bandit

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