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Old 12-31-04, 03:49 AM   #10
Ysdat
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i create quakes just watch this Place-Shift
pick ya up by ya nose so you can get a Face-Lift
^^

allright multi's, bar's a good length.

just Face-It, ill leave you fucking wasted
creating pain, hit ya with luggage just to Incase-It
^^^
another nice multi, again a good bar length

my crews like the taliban cause they bring Mass-Terror
and leaving ya eyes black and blue like maskera
^^^
good attempt at a multi,ok similie's

you think you can beat me? you Silly-Hoe but Really-Though..
you bitches are more fake than silicone

^^
ok bar, good multi, first line a bit stretched though.

i cook more cats than asian chefs
punches to your ear, make ya go deaf

^line's a bit wak, just the cooking cat's part I wasnt really feeling.

im tight on the mic, just say i have rigamortis
and i plow down everything in my path like clinton portis
^^^
ok bar

if you want a victory against me you better neel and Pray-For-It
you want a freestyle, i make you Pay-For-It
^^medium closer,could of come a bit stronger with it.
overall-
flow-8/10
rhyme's-7/10
structure-6/10
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