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Old 12-31-04, 03:56 AM   #27
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Voted For: TheWackestMC

mastermind

*TheWackestMC* cant *Master* this *Mind*/
im bout to beat you like a slave and this master dont lie//

nice opener with the wordplay.

you brought a knife to a gun fight-its gonna be a catastrophe/
punchure ya skin with my lyrical daggers-you cant make a pass at me//

no. the flow was off alot and wasnt complex at all.

too basic.

while you at home watchin 8 mile on tv/
ill be on 106 and park kickin it wit AJ and free//

too simple and just weak.

thinkim gonna pass up a battle wi you?-bitch please/
how easy was it to *Bitch-Slap* this MC//

wack. bad attempt at a punch on this one.

yo you got almost 3 days to post ya verse/
but he probably wont-too busy trin to get his nut to burst//

weakk..weak..weak finisher.

wackest mc

yall dont me to b sparkin the metal, u play ya part in stillettos
i'll lay-up wit ya bitch with the art of Carmello

it was a little basic but i liked the carmello line for some reason. somewhat decent opener.

u say u a mastermind?....i got a faster rhyme
that'll smash ya mind... and leave u last in line

no complexity or punch but at least the flow was good. nice amount of multis in this bar.

them punches pluck this nigga right back in time
they way u wear ya Mic , that shit is fashion crime

a little weak. however, it was better than what mastermind had in most of his verse. still a bad overall attempt at a punch/metaphore.

boy i aint playin, im as wack as they come
only time u POP-POP is when u crakin ya thumbs

lol kinda funny with the first line. the second was an average punch. lol but probably the best line of the battle.

u aint hot those lines is too cold to bake
n ya bars aint heavy, they fools gold in weight

first line was filler and garbage. the second was halfway decent because you attempted a punch.

this bitch prolly stop n cry, when i drop his size
n reveal the fact that he likes dudes wit cock inside


nope. just weak.

stop ya lies, thats why u get ostricized
and them rhymes u use is so old that they fossilized

average..a little basic though. it flowed good at least.

both of you need to work on personals and punches more. but the wackest emcee takes this because he came a slight more complex than mastermind did in his verse. elevate to both of you and stay up
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