all I have to say is...your metaphors are untouchable...this was an extrememly dope piece...1...because of the in direct emotion that was portrayed...2...because it is surrounded by metaphors that all have relevant..and extrememly important significance to the piece.....i have nothing to complain about....the only thing i have to say from person to person..writer to writer...is...your way ahead of everybody here besides a few cats...and to express yourself with such depth...will only leave you unsatisfied if your looking for an understanding by your peers...because I promise you...this piece is way above the heads of many...but don't worry....i like to believe that the greatest unsuccess or failures..are that which are only unsuccessful, because the masses are not capable of comprehending...


that being said...dope drop...and please return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=169371

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