Voted For: Acuity

this was very very close in my opinion props to both...

beginning/ending-acuity, this was a close aspect, i thought acuitys intro was good because of the words used it didnt jump directly into the whole thing it shad good transition and the ending was pretty much a tie both had a good meaningful ending

emotion-acuity, i thought it had a lot more emotion put into it even though this was close...acuitys story felt deeper, the vocab brought this out also

imagery-viscosity, thought the words viscosity used brought out the imagery aspect really well it was a lot easier for me to see what was happening and keep me intuned with what you were talking about

flow-viscosity, just had a better flow basically and i liked how everything was constructed with rain, animal perspective, and childs perspective...i thought that was good

vocab-acuity, basically had a higher vocab and like i said before it brought out more emotion...but it messed up the flow in some parts

this was a really good battle both had their good and bad parts but in the end i was just feelin acuity had a better verse no hate good luck to both

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peace

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