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Old 12-31-04, 01:32 PM   #12
The Black Plague
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Voted For: King~~Dipset

Ok... no offense to ya'll but a wack battle all around... Godz Angelz you started out okay, but in ya second line you basically dissed yaself... and don't play the age shit, cuz you only 12 so it don't work.. it just sounds wack as fuck. The thing about the crown and the puberty shit just didn't make sense to me, and was wack... punches didn't come together, so try to work on ya punches... struc was on target, flow was decent... King you came pretty bad too, but enough to beat him... first line was halfway decent, a attempt at a punch..2nd line made no sense, and was set up horribly... 3rd line was wack too, and was just an attempted statement/punch, but it missed...5th line was decent, Prolly one of ya best lines.... Closer was your best line.. not great but decent... and lose the numbers after ya lines...

OVerall this goes to King Dipset... better attempted punches, and a better set up verse... Godz loses because he tried to many age disses, and his closer was one of the wackest i've ever heard... Not good verses from either, but to me King gets this..
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