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Old 12-31-04, 04:00 PM   #51
1mic
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Posts: 88
From: California
This was feedback posted for Kordozar

IP:

Kordozer: Your verse was better than chaos!! you rhymed a little better!! yur punches where alright!! You got my vote mainly because yur verse had better rhyming!!

Chaos: work on yah rhyme technique!! you had some nice punches but jus threw in words that didn't fit the rhyme scheme!!
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