Voted For: LyLWuN


lookin 4 a win? nope....u still on a scopin route, more like u lost trynna focus out,
but i'm sorry 'G' seems u destroyed just like ya CLIQUE(click), and ya BROKEN MOUSE//
(lol cool opener, wordplay points)
is ya rep protected? imma 'throw u in a pit of fire' and leave u contrasted then,
like i 'possessed a halo,' i'll bring u 'back' 2 'exposed flame' and show ya ASS-AS-SIN//
(k...)
u must got ya 'brains in ya hands'.....HOLD THAT THOUGHT; have u noticed ya weak-quotes?,
guess not after all i'm leavein u 'Open 2 Criticism' just like all of your Free-Posts//
(ooo nasty....and 1st line was illness...wordplay points)
u like 'blind contestants,' how can u see a win? damn u not-hard-lame,
and then a international gangsta? not since ROCK-STAR-GAMES//
(k)
and as far as skill? 'U' and 'I' ain't close enough logically to stoppin me,
cuz by me 'DROPPIN A G' u'd think i meant 'shoppin sprees//
(k....ok ender)

sum- ya wordplay was on point in a lot of places...daamn..very very clever...and ur flow has improved...personals were seen in there as well.....had a few multis...cool shyt....

C'mon fam you serious approachin me with a losin STATS
Ill own you and shove my foot up ya like sum door mats
(eh...weak opener...generic punch)
Lets be real da only time you steppin on da block
Is win ya little sister pushed over the lego box
(eh...same as above)
Nigka please you sayin you a gangsta ya must be on crack
Onlytime you pakin an 9 is when ya took 3 out of da 12 pack
(nah)
Why you frontin to be sumthin ya not homeboi
Im talkin bout bein a bitch cuz i saw you playin with ya momz vibratin toy
(ok....)
Ill merk ya fak ass nigGa,When I rearrange ya face when i let go dem triggaz
Beatin me?thats sum funny shit,Da only to you have have da top verse is when you FIRST spit.....
(umm weak ender and wheres the endin rhyme?)

sum- ok from all that talk u did in my welcome post...i expected a whole lot more than this....all this was below basic stuff...wft is this?? this is text not audio...come with some clever lines man....wordplay enhances that for one....and secondly...shes a chic u couldve came with some more personals.....ur flow was off in the end.....ur punches were pretty weak....and ur personals were eh...ok....no multis.....i dont know, it seems to me u lacked some killer instinct

anyway ...another breakdown just in case this site is blind and loves cryin over votes

multis - lylwun...not many but some
personals - lulwun.....had the edge
punches - lylwun ....by lightyears
wordplay - lylwun...by lightyears
flow - lylwun....slighty off but took it compared to assasin

like i said.....lylwun took this...it was one sided....this is probably gonna be the most detailed vote.....

v=lylwun

d.a.

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