Voted For: Spoken Prophecy



C'mon on fam why you Playin Gangsta on me
Shit I can make a sandwich outta you cuz you str8 up balony
(weak opener...)
Ya neva squeezed a watagun let alone a gauge
So stop dat falsifying before ya body end up on da newspaper front page
(eh..)
You beatin me in battlez is like you gettin a sex,Itz gonna be hard
Cuz my punchez will leave Indentions in you like # on a credit card
(eh..k)
Ya flow still couldnt merk me even if ya threw in sum heat
Cuz ya punches like Mike Tyson against Hollyfield they like to cheat
(eh...k)
Ill clap ya as quick with no question being ask
Muthafuka are you crazy I got punches dat will leave permited behind a mask
(nah)
I see ya by yeah name ya already have Spoken sumthin
But all i hear go is Bullshit ryhmez you bite from Joe Budden
(nah)
So nigga when ya dreamin of fukin a girl im bangin ya Sis
And pull a rkelly move on her and instead of cumin ill piss
(finally...somethin...cool shyt here)
You from chi-town?Damn you fukin up da there rep
Even Ciara had betta Linez in her song 1,2 STEP...
(eh..weak ender)

sum- man...i dont know what it is about ur punches man....alot of ur lines if worded better couldve been alot harder....there was only one set in there that really caught my eye...and honestly the rest were garbage.....take it or leave it....its crit....ur comin with basic generics man.....try usin similes or metaphors that are more well thought out....


this faggot joined the "catholic church with hopes to Romance Kids
Evil? if ur where trapped in hell u wouldnt even be able to Access-Sin!(Assas-Sin)
(cool play on name)
when the Mac hits-it tears chunks and leave niggas smellin like rare Skunk
U scared punk? well ill cock and load my Arms and give u a Bear Hug!
(k)
here it is Evil and Good meet u beat me? I wont loose sleep
Cuz u wouldnt be able to "Spit Hard" even if u had wood teeth!
(ooo nice)
u gay B plus im runnin over ya lines like Duece Staley
U can Spray a clip at the "source awards" and still not merck a Mc Daily!
(k)
u want beef chump come get some and get stomped
U coward ,go stand next to a "yellow wall" and Blend Some!
(lol...k)
its as if i was borned cursed submersed in perverse illness
the scripts i disburse disperse Sins and invert critics!
(k....filler.....but ok)
the first to reverse physics ...pushed up on gavity
and beat"Sin"ful atheist to born again chirstians!
(k)
let me kick the ballistics Assas-Sin the shit u spit is
stretched More than Yao ming doing acrobatic calisthinics!
(ooo cool ender...and nice personal)

sum - ok ok....im feelin this verse....urs was a lil above avg...nothin too complexed...but i like what i saw...ur killer instinct was there...some lines were just plain...but u had some personals in there....and personals win battles versus punches....ur wordplay was there as well.....flow was pretty cool....and u put a couple of multis in there....like in the beginnin....cool shyt



v= sp..

d.a.

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