very very very long........ur flow was kinda hard for me to grasp but its cool.....some of ur wordplay was on point here and some aint.....i saw one of ur battles that ur talkin about.....u got some skill in ya....
try
www.rapworld.com
we have a voters league there to make sure that votes dont get swayed......just a recommendation
u got some cool ish here...read it as a freestyle....not too great but it wasnt weak at all either
peep my final review...see what type of shyt im on...im a fan of wordplay as well
ps...cats here will sleep on an mc...so be prepared....
d.a.