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(x) CeEd:

MIC CHEK
^^^get rid of this
Kid's stupid...acts like hes won nothin' except The Miss World,
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH...shit we just found out that Marv's a Girl,
^^^^^NO.... wack flow.. wack punch... WACK concept
No Worries MaRVJay>>>>> Just turn your name to MaRV's Gay
now your allowed to join the Saturday mornin' Gay Parade,
^^^first line... lol... but wack... second line... very weak
now MaRV mite attack me for me bein' a Kiwi..................
MArVs wack, hes like the Herman without the PEE-WEE,
first line.... NO... second... an aight concept... not bad
But no Beef MArV, you have dope lines and some good flow,
You can pick up guy's now, like they were your blonde hoes,
omg.... ^^^1st lines... this is a battle... dont stick up for your opponent.... second line... give it a rest with this gay shit
has "1009" at the end of his name,kid's old.... i own this game
I will roll him like i wuz rollin a dice.. Christ, your like the Obie
without the TRICE
^^^the 1009 thingy.... YOU FUCKED THAT UP... that was a concept which could have been a god personal... but nooo... ...I own this game.... you went into self glorifyand the last line... was just fucking gay.... so really you fucked this verse.... it was wack flow... that was no personals... punches were weak... you ended up saying good shit bout your oppenent.... and the verse was newbeish..
....nuff said...

ok.... marv..... im not even gonna break down your verse... its was soo fucking newbeish..... get them fucking " things out of your fucking verse... they insult the fucking readers... your verse was crap.... they was not structure in it... your multies were wack.... the personals made no fucking sense at all... basically just shut the fuck up... its was a pathetic verse... you got a problem with me saying this shit then pm me and we'll battle.....
your both newbs.... elevate

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