Banned: Cheating
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Voted For: MiSta_AuTh3nTiQ
flex:
hmm your stucture was good....and your vocab was a lil weak but you need to work on being cretive and witty to make stronger and more tripper punchlines and next time try doing wordplay...its up your advantage alot more but nto bad verse homie pz..no hate
Mista:
that was prob your best ive seen in a while your stuctue lacked at the bottom but the rest of the lines were nice nice punchlines and wittyness wordplay it was all good...as i said your best in awhile man honestly...no hate to both pz..
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