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Voted For: The Dex
The Dex Took This Bcus He Came Harder,His Punches Wass Hittin Ok,String Didnt Have N e Punches,Dex Vokab Wass Koo,String No Vokab,Strukture Tied Between Tha 2 Both Wasnt Good,Overall Both Of You Could Work On Ya Punches And Personals Dex In Tha 1st 2 Lines Is Wea You Had Personals Afta That Ya Verse Fell Off A Lil Bit Keep A Good Overall Verse And Keep Ya Personals,Punches,Vokab And Strukture Good Throughout Tha Whole Thing..........String Dont Try That Street Rappin Shit,Iss Wack On Text Onli In Some Lines Noth Threw Tha Whole Thing Use Vokab Ya Vokab Sucked,Use Decent Personals And Fix Ya Strukture Cus No Hate Honest Vote........
/V The Dex.....Return Tha Favor Link In Mih Sig
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