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Old 12-31-04, 10:36 PM   #8
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Voted For: String9487

eh, doggy u aint hard,.. you just a thug in a dress
i got an ACE up my sleeve that'll SHUFFLE THE DEX
son, ima spit that flame, that'll bubble ya sweat
im a old head in rap, u aint got ya stubble in yet
u try to hype yaself up, but yet u borin still
n ya Wins are leaner than the meat off the Foreman Grill...HOLLA
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ha lol nice punches, had some ill wordplays to go with it. Flow was pretty nice.




Heres String and his girls, their 87 and 94
that string of words, strung together without even a chore

Practising necrophiliac,* sicker than sex with ya gran
Menage a trios without the bras with the blue-rinse clan

Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots
Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot!

Melt you with my words that stopping ya success
Intimidating you with a curse placed like you Macbeth

You getting left by Dex lying face down on the mat,
You been caught it over, we know your acts actually whack!
^^^^^^^^^^^^ alright. good flow. Punches were "eh" okay. nothing really expose to me, work on that.




overall= okay not to dick-ride or anything, but honest vote is that string got you.

let me break it down



The dex you had punches with some wordplays and personals but they were played out

Practising necrophiliac,* sicker than sex with ya gran
Menage a trios without the bras with the blue-rinse clan

Ticking ya brain away, thinking an getting tied up in knots
Quicker than a thick liquor I pour out the stuff that’s hot!

Melt you with my words that stopping ya success
Intimidating you with a curse placed like you Macbeth

You getting left by Dex lying face down on the mat,
You been caught it over, we know your acts actually whack!
^^^^^^^^^^ that whole part was played , played punches no hate fam


String came with personals and ill wordplays, had some good punches. Most of all it was entertaining to me. lol.


u try to hype yaself up, but yet u borin still
n ya Wins are leaner than the meat off the Foreman Grill

^^^^^^^^^^ shit was mad funny. The closer was dope as hell


but *AHEM*

The dex your punches came played, really wasnt effective but you've tried. String i say good verse work on NOT stretching your lines. I give this to string basically cause of harder punches.

No hate dex my opinion peace~!!
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