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Old 12-31-04, 11:38 PM   #5
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it was ok...it was too short to give a descent evaluation on but...there wasnt any vocab, the hook was ok, would be pretty good if it was longer and on audio...seems like a good gangsta mainstream song

my advice just up your vocab,get more detailed, and shit like that...personally its not my style to talk about shit like that but whatever do ya thang

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