ha a criminal story,and not just bragging about it..
I'm feelin this..I feel stupid for not read your shit before..
it wasp leasent to read..and you got structure almost like me..
which is GREAT..and the vocab was good..petty notion wow..
and I liked the ending and the way you almost made this like
a actuall event and no like a narrorator thing...GREAT..award worthy

*cough*vote for me* cough

__________________